I think your reader would appreciate it if you defined/explained the concept of the 'ubermensch' and how it relates to the ideas of Nietzsche.
Does the reader need further evidence by which to understand the connotations of the 'cigarette after sex?' - You're assuming this is obvious to your reader, but it probably isn't and bit of supporting evidence would enhance this point.
Good stuff, Vincent - just some notes below...
ReplyDeleteI think your reader would appreciate it if you defined/explained the concept of the 'ubermensch' and how it relates to the ideas of Nietzsche.
Does the reader need further evidence by which to understand the connotations of the 'cigarette after sex?' - You're assuming this is obvious to your reader, but it probably isn't and bit of supporting evidence would enhance this point.
Just some typos I noticed...
They *trow* (throw)
Regarding Rupert, he *continuous* (continues)