Final WIM Thumbnails
I created these four thumbnails for my final digital shot, showing an abandon / drowning city.
My personal favourite is number 102 as it shows the inner core of Stoller's work in form of the shadows coming from the objects.
I think I will base my final concept drawing on thumbnail 102 but I would be very grateful for any feedback.
I really like number 100!
ReplyDeleteThese are wicked establishing shots! I love 101, lots of energy :) They all feel like you're walking right into it!
ReplyDeleteI really like 100 and 101 too! The colour palette works really well in all of them, but these two stand out to me in terms of composition :)
ReplyDelete101 look so good! Its my fave!
ReplyDeleteFor me, the thing to 'avoid' is a composition where we're mostly left looking at a roadway or path - it's like many of these compositions push your objects to the side of my eyes - I'm compelled to look 'past' them. While I don't think 103 is the strongest of your thumbnails in terms of a drawing, I nonetheless prefer the way it 'clutters' the composition so we've got more to 'see and do'. I agree that 101 has 'lots of energy' however - for me though, it's between 100 and 103. One thing to perhaps consider - raising up the main building so we standing looking up at it through all the other objects, or dropping the building down so we're on a slope surrounded by all the other objects looking past them and through them towards the main temple. I just think fiddling with the composition in this sense might stop your concept art giving so much room to an essentially 'flat' element.
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