Additional WIM Concept Designs

After receiving some really helpful feedback I sat down and did three new concept sketches.

My personal favourite is number 3 as I like the way it draws you into the image.

However I feel like all of them still show too much empty space and I also don't like the fact that you get too easily drawn to the temple of the city.

I will do some more designs tomorrow with a clear head since I am still not quite happy with any of them.


Design 1

Design 2

Design 3

Comments

  1. but 2 and 3 are definitely creating more interest... one thing to consider perhaps is the materiality of the floor/ground itself; at the moment it's 'neutral' and 'not Stoller', but is there an argument for considering some kind of paving or 'Yellow Brick Road' idea - it would certainly be less of an issue with the flooring was 'important' too in this sense?

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