Again... you need to kill off your line-art fully (so the outlining, as we see on the column in the top left corner. I don't think your candles are reading as 'light sources' yet and likewise your water - I think you need to be a little more brave in terms of art directing this interior - it may help to draw down the darkness further and to make the lighting more rich/theatrical as a result... There's not really a sense yet of any light/colour bouncing around this space and I think you could have more fun with it. I think too, there would be more conspicuous rippling coming from the impact of the waterfall - think about the real world consequences of water hitting more water - concentric circle-style ripples etc.
Again... you need to kill off your line-art fully (so the outlining, as we see on the column in the top left corner. I don't think your candles are reading as 'light sources' yet and likewise your water - I think you need to be a little more brave in terms of art directing this interior - it may help to draw down the darkness further and to make the lighting more rich/theatrical as a result... There's not really a sense yet of any light/colour bouncing around this space and I think you could have more fun with it. I think too, there would be more conspicuous rippling coming from the impact of the waterfall - think about the real world consequences of water hitting more water - concentric circle-style ripples etc.
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